SECOND MEETING (DESCRIBING MY SELF) OKE :)

Monday, March 24, 2014 |

Name : Desy Wahyuni

SRN : 12340015

Subject : Writing 2

A. HOW TO WRITE PARAGRAPH WITH ADEQUATE AND INADEQUATE UNITY

Description is used in all forms of writing to create an impression of a person, place, object or event, describe a special place and explain why it is special, describe the most important person in your life.

Another method or strategy of linking sentences inside the paragraph is by the means of parallel structure. It is done by the repetition of sentences patterns, words or phrases within the paragraph.

· In order for a writer or an author to achieve unity of sentences inside the paragraph, a writer or author should make sure that the sentences are connected with the topic sentence.

· The next linking strategy to link sentences is achieved by using a transitional expressions that connect sentences in the paragraph. There’s a lot of transitional expression that could be used. There is a transitional expression that established addition, comparison,contrast,place,purpose,result,summary,time and more.

· Transitional expressions that shows time include the words; meanwhile,at length,immediately and more.

· Conclusion

B. WHAT IS COHERENCE ??

Coherence is one of the characteristic in a good and clear paragraph construction. Unity in paragraph is established when the sentences inside are connected to the main idea or to the topic sentence. Another method or strategy of linking sentences inside the paragraph is by the means of parallel structure. It is done by the repetition of sentences patterns, words or phrases within the paragraph.

C. Paragraph Describing (My Self)

I AM DESY WAHYUNI

This is about me, let me tell you about my self. In this writing, I just want to shared all about me.It will be good to know a little about each other.

Well , My name is Desy Wahyuni and just call me Desy.I was born on December 08 1993 and now I am 20 years old.It is so young, but I still have one little brother.Next, I am studying in Muhammadiyah University of Metro.It is one of the biggest University in Indonesia. So, I enjoyed.I have an appointmennt that I will be “Everything” with this education, so I dedicated to my parents.Now, I live in 15 A Iring Mulyo , Metro-Timur and my home town is in the big city Seputih Banyak, Lampung Tengah.

Physically, I have light brown skin, and my eyes colour are brown. My hair is not too long and my blood type is B. I have height about 156 cm, and my weight around 42 kg.I ever over weight it is arround 54 kg, but I am not tall enough, so I likes big monster. I do not have confident at that time, but noe my body is ideal.

Next, about my personality. I'm kind but extremely short-tempered. My friends have never seen me angry. So it's more like I keep my opinions in my head. I learned to control it and like to think I have become rather patient. It means that I am mostly humble.Sometime,I think a bit to much and take criticism well if it's constructive. My mood swings faster than you can think.Then, I'm very sweet but love cracking jokes and having a good laugh.

Now, let me tell you about my hobby, my hobby is chatting and laughing.I think it is not very boring because it is related with my self and my life.Then, I always wasting my free time for sleeping, gathering with my friends, or check my account of social media.

Finally, The main things is courage will not only show me the way, but will also lead me through the difficulties and unpredictability of life along my way up.

My courage is not only the energy of my mind, but also my possibility maker.

This is my life J

D. Identifying Paragraph

I AM DESY WAHYUNI

(TITLE)

This is about me, let me tell you about my self. In this writing, I just want to shared all about me.It will be good to know a little about each other.

Well , My name is Desy Wahyuni and just call me Desy.I was born on December 08 1993 and now I am 20 years old.It is so young, but I still have one little brother.Next, I am studying in Muhammadiyah University of Metro.It is one of the biggest University in Indonesia. So, I enjoyed.I have an appointmennt that I will be “Everything” with this education, so I dedicated to my parents.Now, I live in 15 A Iring Mulyo , Metro-Timur and my home town is in the big city Seputih Banyak, Lampung Tengah.

Physically, I have light brown skin, and my eyes colour are brown. My hair is not too long and my blood type is B. I have height about 156 cm, and my weight around 42 kg.I ever over weight it is arround 54 kg, but I am not tall enough, so I likes big monster. I do not have confident at that time, but noe my body is ideal.

Next, about my personality. I'm kind but extremely short-tempered. My friends have never seen me angry. So it's more like I keep my opinions in my head. I learned to control it and like to think I have become rather patient. It means that I am mostly humble.Sometime,I think a bit to much and take criticism well if it's constructive. My mood swings faster than you can think.Then, I'm very sweet but love cracking jokes and having a good laugh.

Now, let me tell you about my hobby, my hobby is chatting and laughing.I think it is not very boring because it is related with my self and my life.Then, I always wasting my free time for sleeping, gathering with my friends, or check my account of social media.

Finally, The main things is courage will not only show me the way, but will also lead me through the difficulties and unpredictability of life along my way up.

My courage is not only the energy of my mind, but also my possibility maker.

This is my life J

NOTE :

RED : INTRODUCING

GREEN : BODY (MAIN PARAGRAPH)

YELLOW : CONCLUSION